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Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2001-07-27 03:12 PM

Hey Passions, I guess y'll didn't expect to see me so soon but, here I am ready to lay it down for y'll...I confess that I not a love poet so, take it easy on me as this is a new poem I wrote today....I hope y'll like it.....peace!!

When my last love left me, I confess,
I used to be depressed and traumatized
as I became afraid to love again,
afraid to move on with my life
so, when I wasn't looking,
love caught me by surprise.
When I least expected,
an angel stepped into my life
as, I'm happy as a feign with a crackpipe
because, my happiness, is so high!
Honestly, I would have never thought,
an angel would appear in my life
and suddenly make things right.
Honestly, I would have never thought,
our friendship would bomb overnight
and explode into love like dynamite
because, I wasn't searching for love
and so wasn't she
and if that's true,
then I guess, we were meant to be,
I guess she's my angel named destiny
that the man of infinity, has sent to me
as her essence and beauty, is certainly heavenly.
Oh my oh my, love has certainly caught me by surprise,
as I find myself, blowing kisses to the sky,
thanking the almighty god, for blessing me
and resurrecting my once-dormant love life
as I confess, that I would have never guessed,
in a million centuries, in a million light years
that my golden paradise, would be standing right here
as, my soul's been enriched, french-kissed,
by an angel of love, in complete surprise
as, she has my soul shining bright as a star,
as you see, the twinkle in my eyes.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 07-28-2001).]

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

1 posted 2001-07-27 05:14 PM

Your happiness is contagious! Good luck!

Betty Lou Hebert

Miranda
Junior Member

since 2001-07-26

Posts 32
OOOOOklahoma!

2 posted 2001-07-27 05:23 PM

I am with Trillium ... it is contagious. Much congratualtions to you on finding a woman to inspire you to write joy!
Miranda

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-07-27 06:10 PM

"my souls been enriched...french kissed."
Some nice lines in this poem...happy for you...we all need some love and appreciation...James

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

4 posted 2001-07-28 01:13 AM

Thank you all, for reading to my poem!

Nathan

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-07-28 11:08 AM

Indeed I did not expect to see a new one from you Nate, but here it is. . . and what is it?? It's a love poem from the Dogg himself!!!

It's great. . . I love it. . . just goes to show you that love is never when you expect it. . . but, I'm wondering. . . how do you French kiss a soul?? LOL

Peace!!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

6 posted 2001-07-28 02:30 PM

Thank you Sven, I'm glad you like it cause, I really don't think highly of this poem..........peace and one love!!

P.S. I have no idea how a soul can be french-kissed but I tried to use that phrase as a figurative speech or something....whatever though, I see what you saying...it doesn't make sense....I basically put that phrase there cause, it sounded good to my ears.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (edited 07-28-2001).]

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

7 posted 2001-07-28 11:34 PM

Sounds like you got yourself
something great!
I am happy for you!
You're lucky to have found
someone you care so much for.
There is some great stuff in this
poem, Very Nice!
For someone who claims
not to be used to the love
scene poems, you sure could
have fooled me!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

8 posted 2001-07-29 02:28 AM

It's so good to read you happy...no heart is more deserving!

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

9 posted 2001-07-29 02:58 AM

I'm thinking someone is feeling very lucky indeed to have inspired this!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2001-07-29 04:00 AM

You deserve a loving heart...hugs Nathan

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

11 posted 2001-07-29 05:29 AM

That's great, good for both of you.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

12 posted 2001-07-29 01:48 PM

Thanks, my friends for reading my poem!

Nathan

DYME
Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 104
Texas

13 posted 2001-10-06 03:26 PM

You did it to me again...you wrote a poem that grabed my attention. Keep it up. Peace.

I'm not crazy...I have papers to prove it!!

No weapon formed against me shall prosper... ISAIAH 54:17

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