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To Say Good-bye.......
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To Say Good-bye....... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I say good-bye to you ......Everyday...... I try to find clever ways Of letting you go Of moving on Symbolically Metaphorically Spiritually …..and just when I think I’ve succeeded in convincing your memory To stop haunting me I awake to your chains Rattling inside my heart Taunting me Challenging me To find a way To excise all thoughts of you Once and for all ~SEA~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
they're always there aren't they?? even when we think that they're gone. . . excellent work SEA. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Very very good try... in this attempt to wave goodbye... |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
Sea!! I LOVE IT!! my god, i love your work! AWESOME JOB!! ~Jeff~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... this too suits me today.. I enjoyed SEA... great work describing the quandary and the effects... |
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Miranda Junior Member
since 2001-07-26
Posts 32OOOOOklahoma! |
Lovely, I feel very connected ot this. The old been there done that law. Oh, for a miracle cure..... Miranda |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
You can tell your heart to let go, but, it never can and besides unconsciousy it refuses to anyways. Very well expressed, I relate more than you could ever know, in fact, I've been trying to let go of someone for almost 4 years now, the pain never goes away Melissa~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, SEA, do we ever lose them once and for all? Sometimes I wish, very much....wonderful write..very gentle smile |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this really lifted me, it has a strength to it, something I can hold onto. " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ You know I like the haunt of those memories~ Thanks for sharing with me~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You have said it well Sea...James |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
A great read SEA, worry not of the memories, accept the past that can't be changed, cherish the thoughts that bring happiness and the devil of grief will slowly leave. Rick |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Sometimes you must leave the ghosts to rattle their chains and enjoy their hauntings.... I can't believe i missed this one. I like this one very much SEA. You probably know that, but I'll tell you anyway *S*. |
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