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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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0 posted 2001-08-28 11:00 PM

Whisper in my ear
Tell me all those things
It all works out
Love prevails
~And you're always right~

Bring me joy
Make me smile
Warm my heart
Saying it will only get better
~And you're always right~

Never take time
Left all alone
Now quiet nights
You're too busy, I should understand
~And you're always right~

Nothing is certain
No gaurantees
Promises are for breaking
It's what you're thinking
~And you're always right~

Written for my friend who's having some boy issues at the moment.

HopelessRomanticGuy
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since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

1 posted 2001-08-28 11:04 PM

Your friend should be proud to have you as a friend! I love this poem, it's the great, simple works like this that keep me coming back! Hope to see more.

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-08-28 11:52 PM

i liked this one lots jenn!..and damn jenn..you're always right!!

...this was really cute. i hope your friend understands..

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SunShine913

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since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

3 posted 2001-08-29 12:37 PM

AWSOME JEN .. and glad to see your pic working lol!!! i loved it it is in my libary!!

:exorcist:!~Andrea~!:exorcist:

*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

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4 posted 2001-08-29 08:57 AM

Awww thank you guys!! Yeah, I was talking with my friend last night before I wrote this, and I just wanted to slap this guy... but at the same time slap some sense into her you know?? Men like that are ignorant, but the women who put up with it are insane.

Thanks for the replies!!

Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

5 posted 2001-08-29 10:05 AM

Crazy timing. My friend is going through the exact same thing right now. She is driving me insane. Good read Jenn. It was definately appropriate in my life right now.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-08-29 10:45 AM

Males...*loads her paintgun* right, where is he?

I like this one Jenn but not as much as your others. The repetition was a nice touch but with all that emotion you have in you, it could be just a tad stronger. It is nice to see you writing such an important piece for a friend. Hura for you! lol....oooo crazy...*walks away*

Thank ya for pointing this in my direction. Keep 'em coming.

~AF~

I'm a little teapot, short and stout! Here is my handle, here is my spout. *toot toot*

Spice
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since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

7 posted 2001-09-01 02:51 PM

I'm with Lizzy, It's not my fav of yours- But it's still a damn good piece. Loved the repetition. INfact, I just like the whole menaing of the line "ANd you're always right" hehe.
Thanks for the read

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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