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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Those who don't underastand such a sweet taste have not yet felt the flavour, hidden under the heart. ^*~*^ Weak knees tummy full of bees, the wonderful taste of love would have laughed and teased. ^*~*^ The feeling beyond redemption, the need and not just wanting to look it in the eye and indulge on its feed can be described as virtually nothing. ^*~*^ Only then did its beauty, call upon my heart, lock it in a million roses and never let it part. Dedicated to Matt, without him my thoughts on love were naive and untrue! Now I know the true feeling! "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
This poem is truely beautiful thank you for posting it! ~*Freedom Is Not Free*~ (Korean War Memorial) |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I really enjoyed the read KK I thought you did very well here keep on sharing  Oh and I just love the thought of a "tummy full of bees"... Andrew |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
I too, like that "tummy full of bees" part. Great read! Hope to see more from you!  -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"Weak knees tummy full of bees" Cute line. It's my fav. Sweet poem. I liked it alot. Keep posting. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*Sigh* These feelings are ALL too familiar! Best feeling in the world, Love. Miss it like hell, too! Nice work, Kim. I really enjoyed this. This is a very good, emotion-filled piece. The bees part's cute  --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
emotions were nicely expressed ...i liked the poem...and a great tribute...thanks for sharing it...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Your words are truly amazing and very well thought off. I enjoyed each line read. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see more so keep sharing. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was a beautiful poem. Love is a powerful emotion. But it causes so much pain. Unless you've found your soul mate, which I hope you have. *Amanda* |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I liked this. It's such n overwhelming feeling and you describe so well. Great poem,keep on posting more of 'em Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww so sweet! Great sentiments here. Jenn "Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aaww! I'm glad you found love in your life, and I'm glad you're able to write about it! Good write! Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this one. Such a display of beautiful poetry. I really liked this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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