Teen Poetry #5 |
Life of a Canadian Drama Character |
fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Where's my booze, where's my socks? I dunno, that's tough rocks! I am tired, you are too I am drunk, so are you! It's fun living up here, You don't ever know what The next problem will be, only when, you will see... The next problem is around The next corner today, Perhaps government will strike, Or perhaps she will hike Out away from this stupid place...... How do we look, eh? "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
LOL.... this was very entertaining. Syllable scheme and tense organization in the first stanza seemed to have a great comedic feel to it. Very blunt and, well, canadian drama character. I absolutely love this! Your latest work is gold. Keep posting! ~Allan You eat the brains of an old, wise man. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
lol, WOO! Canadians rock. A very entertaining write. The pause at the end was so appropriate! You make Canadian Dramatists (and Canadians...) proud. Till your next piece! °L.§.W.° Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Weird frac, very weird. I thought it was quite entertaining. haha. I enjoyed it. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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The Exile Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 52Ontario, Canada |
I thought it's really great: short, funny and Canadian!! Keep posting we wanna see more eh!! - Alex |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
It's CANADIAN!..What else can I say..that says it all! Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hmmm this was funny. Don't have much to say about Canada tho...don't really know much about it, and I gather that all of my info would be stereotyping the country Jenn "Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Hey, Canada! LOL, I like Canada.... Anyway, Frac, dude, this is cool. I think it's really cute, put a smile on my face. I like it. ~Kristin I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Let's hear it for the Northern neibhors Entertaining I must say. Great post. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
THis was umm cool i guess never read one like this before .. but keep up the work... 15166598864 bye bye !~Andrea~! |
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