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fractal007
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0 posted 2001-08-26 01:12 AM


Where's my booze, where's my socks?
I dunno, that's tough rocks!
I am tired, you are too
I am drunk, so are you!

It's fun living up here,
You don't ever know what
The next problem will be,
only when, you will see...

The next problem is around
The next corner today,
Perhaps government will strike,
Or perhaps she will hike
Out away from this stupid place......


How do we look, eh?

"If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh"

-- Magus

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Allan Riverwood
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1 posted 2001-08-26 11:16 AM


LOL.... this was very entertaining.  
Syllable scheme and tense organization in the first stanza seemed to have a great comedic feel to it.  Very blunt and, well, canadian drama character.  
I absolutely love this!  Your latest work is gold.  Keep posting!
~Allan

You eat the brains of an old, wise man.

chasing rain
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2 posted 2001-08-26 06:23 PM


lol, WOO! Canadians rock.
A very entertaining write. The pause at the end was so appropriate! You make Canadian Dramatists (and Canadians...) proud. Till your next piece!  

°L.§.W.°

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2001-08-29 01:44 PM


Weird frac, very weird. I thought it was quite entertaining. haha.
I enjoyed it.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

The Exile
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since 2001-07-14
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4 posted 2001-08-30 10:20 PM


I thought it's really great: short, funny and Canadian!! Keep posting we wanna see more eh!!

- Alex

Delirious_Smurf
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5 posted 2001-08-30 10:39 PM


It's CANADIAN!..What else can I say..that says it all!

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

Jenn Cirrincione
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6 posted 2001-08-31 08:34 AM


Hmmm this was funny. Don't have much to say about Canada tho...don't really know much about it, and I gather that all of my info would be stereotyping the country  


Jenn

"Baby I've been drifting away, dreaming all day, of holding you, touching you, the only thing that I wanna do is be with you..."Faith Hill

angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12
Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH
7 posted 2001-08-31 07:20 PM


Hey, Canada! LOL, I like Canada....

Anyway, Frac, dude, this is cool. I think it's really cute, put a smile on my face. I like it.  

~Kristin

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

I'm a nobody, nobody is perfect, therefore I'm perfect.

fozzyozzy
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since 2001-03-15
Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia
8 posted 2001-08-31 11:45 PM


Let's hear it for the Northern neibhors

Entertaining I must say. Great post.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

SunShine913
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9 posted 2001-08-31 11:49 PM


THis was umm cool i guess never read one like this before .. but keep up the work...

15166598864  bye bye

                    !~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

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