Teen Poetry #5 |
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Just Admit It |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
I'm tired of being ignored by you, and feeling like I can't call anymore. I'm fed up with what you put me through, and tired of always wanting more. Just admit it already, you should know that I know everything, I know that you love me, but do you know that yourself? Just admit it already, you should know it would matter, I know how you feel, but do you know that yourself? Do you know? I see you when I close my eyes, I wake up and wonder where you are, I want you next to me always, I wish the distance weren't so far. Just admit it already, you should know it would change everything, but we could have something great, do you know this all yourself? Just admit it already, cuz we could break the boundaries, we could set the standards, be the ones we thought we weren't. Just admit it. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Goodness alyssa... You are just head over heals, smoke in the eye, in love. Just bound and determinded to make him admit it too. HeHe. Nice write here. You expressed yourself well. Just give this to him! And if the point doesn't get across to him- Kick him!! hehe You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
I'm not sure I agree with Jessica completely. As a male, I KNOW some of us are THAT thick, but if they are thick enough to miss this, then all that kick would do is hurt, believe me, I KNOW! Just kidding. The poem got your feelings across really well. I hope you get'm to realize he loves u too. Rich Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here Allysa. Sounds like you just need to flat out say what you feel to the guy. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa, forget nitsuj and just go for this new Jordan guy. Seems like he is a much better person and he makes you feel better about yourself. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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