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lauren03
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0 posted 2002-04-05 12:32 PM


I think I'm falling for you
I promised myself not again,
I was wronged and so I said not again,
but here I lay wondering at night,
you've said the words.......
but are they true?
I still don't feel right saying those words that hurt me so much,
I've fallen once.....
only to find I was wrong....
lied to and cheated on...
hurt by my love......
but now your here,
I'm ready to give you my all,
but you have to mean what you say
the day will come when I can say it back
I dunno when, or if even to you
I like you a lot, your all I ever think about
the one I always want to be with
but if I fall will you hurt me?
I'm scared of how I feel,
so I'll be careful

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2002-04-05 01:00 AM



lauren-
These kinds of feelings can, indeed, be scary,
and you've done a great job of expressing it.
I hope it all works out for you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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2 posted 2002-04-10 11:50 AM


Falling for someone i believe is completely out of our control but sometimes it can be so wonderful I hope everything turns out good

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