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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
First you stole my heart, locking it in you, Openingmy blank pages to write your soul there Reaching out to comfort me, never to let me fall. Every kiss you give, every sweet touch - Very pleasing will they always be. Every second we're together is Realized it'll all be better once it's forever. This is dedicated to my fiance whom I'll hopefully be spending forever with. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
what a deep poem I love it keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
That was a great poem. You obviously care a lot about this person (DUH!) Why else would you marry him!! *Amanda* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"Openingmy blank pages to write your soul there" This was really sweet, Mistic. Best wishes to you and your fiance.  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
hmmmmm... how very sweet of you angel.  now, if I only could get AHOLD of you today... "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. This was exceptionally sweet. I ABSOLUTELY loved the line about writing the soul on the blank page. That was awesome. Hope to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You're very lucky to have this person in you're life. Cherish what you have I really enjoyed this poem. I LOVED the first two lines about writing his soul on your blank pages... wow! Amazing work. Nice job, Stephanie! Hope to see more soon. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
What a lovely poem. Very nicely written and what's even better is that it is actually written for someone you care very much about. "Every second we're together is Realized it'll all be better once it's forever." ^^ Fave lines.  ~AF~ Just because I hear voices doesn't mean I'm crazy...SHUT UP IN THERE!!! |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
thanks for replying everyone I just wanted to let everyone know that it also says forever going down the side with the first letter of each line, since no one seemed to notice that, not even my fiance when i gave it to him. oh well i guess |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Did so! Just didn't realize I did till you pointed it out to me "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow...i loved how you worte the imagery with full of emotions ...great poem...and its a great tribute...enjoyed greatly...hope to see more!...bye  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
That is a very beautiful poem written for someone you love. Good for you girl. I wish you all the happiness hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
COngrats on your engagement hun!! this was a very sweet and romantic poem...give this to him! Good job i liked it |
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Hill's_Chatabox Junior Member
since 2001-07-10
Posts 46USA |
GREAT PoEm!!!! I liked this a lot. I always try to read everyone that you have posted, because I love them all. good job. Shoot for the moon cause if you miss you'll still end up in the *stars*!!! |
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