Teen Poetry #5 |
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Playing Hide and Seek on a Winter Morning in New York |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
A squat gray building Bricks lay low across its skin. Winter is drawn upon the city ground As it lightly snows. A harsh light glares across The clear glass of my window Hungrily seeking some kind of flesh To freeze and sacrifce Before the wintry cold But it only finds glass And my reflection Against the window pane Laughing. I go into the bathroom and close the door To keep the light from finding me. It is a game Of hide and seek. And I am winning. Or cheating at least. I wash and dress Into my clothes for work Worn a million times, yet no one No one ever seems to remember Because everyone tries to forget. The light finds me again And laughs because it found me. I tell it to go away, Yet it only rises higher in triumph. Glaring at its reflection, I put on my heavy coat And trudge down the stairs And onto the New York streets Towards work. The sun follows me Or tries to at least For the buildings tower above it And block the light From finding me. And I walk in triumph Yet I do not rise For the seekers will find me... ===== *sigh* I miss winter. Don't call me crazy. I know I am... ![]() -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... [This message has been edited by chasing rain (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
I love the winter!!!! i thought this poem was very cute. i can relate ![]() You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Winter is my fave season too for a variety of reasons too numerous to list here. I love this poem. It's one of those things you want to print out and read everday before you get ready. Thanks for the read "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Haha this is quite adorable! Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Cute poem I really enjoyed it! Lauren |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
The title REALLY caught my eye. Very interesting poem... I know EXACTLY what you mean. I miss winter too ![]() ![]() --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I enjoyed this one. The title was rockin'. Leah, you've been posting awesome poetry lately. Keep it up. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
That was great. I looooved it. It was so lovable and at the same time it had more to it ![]() ![]() Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is really good..i loved this one leah...you are one of my favourites here..and this one is wonderful!...we're still in winter here...wanna come down here and live with me? ![]() Piece you life together and you WILL find holes. |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
well, i dont like winter much...casue all they ladies be covered up...if you know what i mean?.. ![]() ![]() if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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Android 17![]() ![]()
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
Yeah, winter kicks Bootay!!! I love winter! Huh, Cherish...you have winter now?! DARN YOU! Lol j/k Man Leah, this is one of my favs...WINTER!!! No matter what it's on...I love the winter! There's no point in living, if you can't feel alive! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Oooh Leah. Very good work. Although it's written much more simpler than your other pieces it still has the whole element of mystery to it. The end throws you off completely but the whole game between you and the sun was very original. Really great work. Keep 'em coming. ![]() ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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