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punkrockerrobin
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0 posted 2001-08-17 04:58 AM


five years has gone by and we are still friends.
you've put up with whatever i could dish out.
i'm sorry for the things i have done wrong.
for i know now that you've always hated it.
so i will change,
and no longer will see me in that place.
i will respect your wishes and leave.
i am sorry for anything and everything i've done.
i know i am crazy and get out of hand.
i know i went to far with what i did.
so the room is yours.


robin
sorry ali didn't mean to make ya mad on yahoo.

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

© Copyright 2001 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-17 05:03 AM


ok ppl don't get mad but this is gonna be my last poem for like a week cus i got some medical stuff i have to take care of yuck! but anyways i'll talk to ya lata. feel freeto email me cus no one ever does anymore.
robin

i don't give up without a fight so boys beware!

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2 posted 2001-08-17 05:47 PM


  noooooo!!!!!! *clings on to your leg*  stay stay!  haha ok anyways i understand you have some stuff you need to take care of....we'll miss you around here so hurry back!   the poem was good.

You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights

[This message has been edited by DarkAngelOfTheStars (edited 08-17-2001).]

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3 posted 2001-08-20 10:34 PM


Well good luck on the medical "stuff".  I hope all is well..

As for the poem... this is a sweet apology.  How could anyone resist something like that?     I enjoyed it.

Hurry back!

--Marie

If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car.

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4 posted 2001-08-27 11:42 AM


Yea I agee with marie...very sweet apology. Come back to us soon,ya hear?!  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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5 posted 2001-08-27 03:03 PM


This was a nice apology.  I hope everything goes OK w/ the medical stuff.  Dont stay away too long, or you'll go into PIPShock.  HeHe!!
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