Teen Poetry #5 |
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Love |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Love Matt if you only knew how much I love you When you hold me so tight in your arms You make me think about you and I You tell me you love me from your heart And when I look into your eyes I get lost Then I look deeper and you make my world so joyful As we looked into the lake I saw my dads face I knew he was happy Because I found you The first kiss made me so happy I wished that I could stayed with you But we went home But I love you to death Your voice makes me melt Your body makes me feel small Love, Min August 14, 2001 Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Beautiful, sweet poem. I love it.. You're lucky, you sound so much in love.. good luck with this Matt ![]() ~Sarah |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
He knows I love him, he's so sweet. I mean you have to love someone whos that nice to you. ![]() ![]() Some people come into our lives and go quickly. Some people stay for awhile and leave footprints on our hearts. We are never ever the same. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
great work Minna. You seem happy. ![]() Regina |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is very sweet. You seem extremely happy, hope things stay that way! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
*Sigh* So sweet, so filled with love....I'm jealous. HeHeHe. Very nice write. ![]() You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Aww.. Jesa... I love you! Hehe.. This is a beautiful poem, Minna. I'm SO glad that you're happy with him. It sounds like you've found a great guy! Wonderful work, here. ![]() --Marie If going to church makes you a Christian, then sitting in a garage makes you a car. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Awsome poem it is really sweet keep up the great work! Lauren |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very sweet poem Minna try sharing this poem to this special someone thanks for the read keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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