Teen Poetry #5 |
converse (repost from open poetry #5) |
slickpnkgal New Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 5 |
They come in all different, sizes and kinds, they are so comfy, I wear 'em all the time. Converse All-Stars, they're totally great, Converse All-Stars, are really first rate. No one's too old, or even too young, they're hip and they're comfy, and don't cost a ton. Converse All-Stars, my most favorite type of shoe, Converse All-Stars, are good for the health too. Okay so I'm done, since I probably sound crazy you see, but Converse All-Stars, are the ones for me. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Hmmm, that was interesting. I've never read a poem about shoes before. Well, keep writing! Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Interesting poem it's cool I like it.Keep up the great work. Lauren |
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California Rockstar Junior Member
since 2001-08-09
Posts 13State of Confusion |
*CLAPPING* HOORAY! Someone who shares my love of all-stars...though-- i've all called them Chuck's....no matter... i thought the poem was very cute and i can definately connect with it. Happy writing. |
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slickpnkgal New Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 5 |
woah! YOUR MOM ok ali had to do it! i didn't know that you could be this talented hahaha.ok peoples that read this reply ali is werid beware! haha dude ali great job on the poem! robin ps. have fun in cali see ya when ya get back. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL! This was a fun one I enjoyed this... gave me a laugh, hehe. Well, I'm glad you enjoy converse all-stars. They're a good type of shoe, I must admit. Thanks for sharing this bit of info with us --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really found this to be clever. Extremely well done. The poem was a very fun read. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Cute poem. Nice tribute to your sneakers LOL! |
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