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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
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i am here, waiting for you. i am here, listening. i cry because, you hurt me. i hear what you say. nothing you do can change my mind. you hurt me. did you know i am here. listening, waiting, and watching you. watching to see if you will love me. i am here! -robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I really connected with this. the situation seems very familiar to me. It's a tough situation, but keep your head up, and don't lose sight of who you are in this struggle. Love is very blind, and oftentimes it's easy to do that over another.  Nice work on this poem. I liked the repitition.Well done! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
This poem is really sad but I totally connect with what you are saying.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
aww...ppl in this forum are gonna give me an emotional overload. I've gone almost 3 years without crying and this is the 2nd piece in one night that nearly brought me to tears... it was a good piece...i didn't read it..i felt it..very moving...great poem " How can i feel if i can't breathe...?" |
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slickpnkgal New Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 5 |
awwwwww i'm sorry didn't mean to make ya cry. robin |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I thought this was an awesome poem. You seem to know exactly what I'm feeling right now and the expression was great! I like your signature quote because that's the way I am too.  Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
I liked this one. I can totally relate. I know that sounds bad cause I'm a guy but hey... oh well! It is a very sad poem. I loved the ending! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
wow robin that was really good you've come a long ways since I first started reading your poetry but hey I think all of us here have in one sense or another. anyways I'll talk to you later...Peace....DOGWOOD REPRESENT we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
very nice poem, really moved by it, keep writtin your work is much enjoyable |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
great poem  You know you 've completely descended into madness when the matter of shampoo has ascended to philosophical heights |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one a lot. Well done here!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow Nice poem keep it up All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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