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katherine
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Canberra Australia

0 posted 2001-08-11 01:27 AM

this came to me thinking about last night it's not great.

Living life is....

Takeing each day as it comes.
Thinking "happy thoughts".
Staying positive.
Living life is being able to laugh at yourself.
Watching a full grown cat act like a kitten.
Falling in and out of love.
Living life is going for what you want.
Picking up that phone and dialing.
Not worring what people think or what they say about you.
Living life is doing your own thing.
Not being afraid to flirt with the stranger next to you.
Being a friend.
Living life is pushing yourself.
Takeing risks.
Not planning everything.
Living life is getting rid of the destrutive parts of your life when you can.
Enjoying every moment you can.
Takeing the good with the bad.

Living life is being YOU.

"by takeing no risks you are really risking everything"
Vic's RE book

[This message has been edited by katherine (edited 08-11-2001).]

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-08-11 03:03 AM

Aw, this is a nice message, Katiepoo.

  Very precious.
I'd cut the repitition a teensie bit on this poem.  See how it works if you only say "living life is" at the start of every third line or so.  It might sound a bit better that way.
Only a small suggestion.

Yours,
~Allan

The children of the nobility are playing here. they look up at you with disgust as you come near.

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-08-11 04:36 AM

I really like this one. Awesome message... Sometimes you get so caught up in things and forget to live... I like the way you showed all the simple things in life that make it so great. Good job on this. ~adds this to my library~

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

AngelShell
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since 2000-03-01

Posts 446
not heaven nor hell so...

3 posted 2001-08-11 04:42 AM

This was good, it reminded me of that series "Love Is..." you know the little cartoons with the two naked people...no...nevermind *looks away and blushes*

~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-12 11:42 AM

I really liked this one, Katie. VERY positive outlook on life, despite all the challenges it throws at us sometimes. I liked this otimistic view. I needed to read something like this today, so thank you very much for sharing it. It's very well written!

--Marie

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

5 posted 2001-08-12 09:32 PM

Your poem is erry good and it has a great message.I agree with you everyone should be themselves because that is what life is about. Because if you don't your not really liveg your life yur living for someone else.But anyway keep up the awsome work.
Lauren

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2001-09-03 02:55 AM

Your poem was really good. I really enjoy it. Well done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Jezziekaka
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since 2001-08-21

Posts 58
where the trees touch the sky

7 posted 2001-09-05 07:58 PM

katherine~"Living life is being able to laugh at yourself" that is what Mom and Dad are always saying laugh at yourself. ( which is hard to do at times!) LOL
liked this alot.

Jezzika

be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise!

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

8 posted 2001-09-05 08:06 PM

Wow! I have a friend who keeps giving me the same advice, maybe she has a point... I think I'm gonna print this one, It's just one of those poems that I'm gonna need to read every now and again, I hope you don't mind! Hope to see more inspirational peices from you in the future!

Rich

Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually).

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