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MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 166
West Virginia

0 posted 2001-08-10 02:27 AM


~This is a fun poem I thought about when I had 4 coincid blocked poems~  ~Don't be a pessimist and maybe you'll enjoy this~  


Please Don't Lock my poems
My writing style is really growin'
Good post or bad post
Let's critique to argue who has the most

I Loved this one, but you wrote this, so it's bound to suck
Can I ask, where JBaker gets his luck?

Please don't lock my poems
Can you see how I keep em flowin'?
You diss my work without even knowin'
The experiences I express in my own poem.

This one could be ok, but
Well my friend I do believe you are a nut
I would go to a different forum
but no one else wants me
Are you that much better, really?



"Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon
  

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mistic
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since 2001-05-06
Posts 233
Idaho, U.S.A.
1 posted 2001-08-10 12:52 PM


hehe well it's definately unique  

Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there.

Spice
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since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.
2 posted 2001-08-10 03:48 PM


"You diss my work without even knowin'
The experiences I express in my own poem."
True, people can interpret things many different ways. (Take the bible for example.)
Anyway. Not my fav of your posts- but oh well for me. HaHa. The JBaker line caught my eye though... I think I've seen you make a comment on that before. Though Jbaker writes some nice/beautiful poetry- I just don't find them to be my style, something that interests ME. You on the other hand, though your attitude bites at times, I am always highly interested in what you have to say- poetry wise. In conclusion- I'm glad you didn't let a few locked threads stop you from posting all together. I would have been bummed.  

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
3 posted 2001-08-12 09:56 PM


Your poem is cool I really like it because I've had some of my poems locked and it made me really mad.But don't stop posting because they can't lol all your poems up.Keep up the great work.
  Lauren

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4 posted 2001-08-13 11:32 AM


Holy negative vibes! Oh well, won't let that hinder anything. This didn't appeal to me one bit, but I'm over it. Hey, I was honest, eh? See ya around, Moe.
  ~Carly

Speak softly and carry a beagle.

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught."
   ~Edouard Manet

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5 posted 2001-08-13 01:34 PM


Very pessimistic view on the forums, Moe.  I didn't like this.  If you have a problem with something that's going on here, let the administrative or moderators know, rather than trying to get attention here in Teen.  We could really be better off without the negative comments like this.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25
Posts 166
West Virginia
6 posted 2001-08-13 03:19 PM


OH sure, as soon as you show me where the forums say not to post anything that doesn't appeal to other member's wants. I have no problems, only solutions, but you people like to keep things goin eh? It's just too bad that I don't have a boat to rock.....

"Nothing will stop me, and whether I'm here or wherever I may be, I'll always have the same feelings, I'll say what I feel." ~Lennon
  

keoni
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since 2000-10-16
Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC
7 posted 2001-08-13 04:01 PM


I can't say anything good or bad about this poem. It is negative, but we can't always be positive. I have alot of work that I can't post here due to vulgarity, and content that isn't allowed on this forum. It sucks that I can't post them, but it's the rules. I had another forum that I could post these poems on, but I didn't get the response that I wanted. Passions has accepted most of my work, so I enjoy posting here. I write for myself, if it can't be posted here, oh well!Don't change your writing styles just so it can, just post the ones you can, and keep the ones you know you can't post to yourself. I'm not telling you what to do, that's just what I have done since I have been here.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Acies
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8 posted 2001-08-24 07:05 PM


I believe that you have been emailed already by other moderators as to why some of the posted poems were locked.  If you have any other questions regarding this matter, please email me and I'll try to clear things up with you.

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma

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9 posted 2001-08-28 01:26 PM


I think it's nice of you to express yourself so freely within the forums. I do agree with your freedom of expression, "as soon as you show me where the forums say not to post anything that doesn't appeal to other member's wants"- seems like you're using the regulations to validate your poem here, and you are completely correct. You do have a right to post this, as we (the mods) have a right to lock your poems due to them breaking certain guidelines.

So, you see, we're both working with the same basis here....the guidelines.

Well done on the poem.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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