Teen Poetry #5 |
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Mommy and Daddy |
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Starnite Junior Member
since 2001-07-05
Posts 41Wisconsin |
Mommy and Daddy You guy seperated when I was young, 6 to be exact. It was hard for me to except, Going to dad's Every other weekend. I have had times When I blamed it on me You guys told me "It's not your fault." I've learned that now That I am 14. It been hard not seeing you dad, And it's not easy living with you mom. You both have remarried nom. And out of that I gained: A stepmom, Laura A stepdad, Harold 2 stepbrothers, Tylor & Freddy 2 new families: Heim & Sonnentag Most imporant: I have gained a whole new life. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
your strength shines ![]() |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Ewww...Divorce sucks. In my case though, I think it was for the best. My parents are much better people when they aren't together. But I completely understand how ya feel, not getting to see your dad. Tough situation. The poem was well done, like Sea said- your strength is potrayed so well here. Thanks for the read. ![]() You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Thats a nice out look on it and a great poem! ![]() -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Yeah my rents are divorced aswell and MY rents divorced when I was around 6 and now I AM 14...OOooo!! But it was so hard at first not to see me dad...but now it's way cool I liek it that way...and now hes moving to CA...so I'll see him less...not sure what to think of that but yeah. But yeah good poem I get you ![]() |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hey I'm so glad that you can deal with is so easly!! Cuz i mean.. It's not easy... I'm also 14, My real dad died when i was 2 and my mom got remarried, but I can't stand the guy! So you are lucky.. Not every thing works out great.. and yours did!! I'm happy for you!!! Thanks for the read!!! Always, Amanda If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
*gives a hug to amanda* :sad: Ack I'm sorry that things turned out that way...My mother is dating this guy I can't stand either..I don't know if they're planning on marrying..no one ever informs me anything..well it's always good to share stories cuz people may relate to them and understand. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
*hug* ![]() Divorce is always a very hard thing to deal with. I'm sorry you've had a hard time. Your parents are right when they tell you it's not your fault. I really liked this poem... nice outlet of emotions, there. ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
im felt an almost 3rd person perspective here... you spoke about something which was obviously such an impact on your life with such simplicity... i think the poem benifited from this... good strong piece ALLIE |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a very emotional poem in my view and it showed how strong you are to think of it as a new life and not the end of one. I really enjoyed this post it was very good, I found it very easy to relate to! Keep writing! ![]() ^*~Kicking Kim~*^ ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done here. I enjoyed the poem. Tough situation looked upon positive....I admire that. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Wow! I liked this poem alot. I think very well done. ![]() Jezzika be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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