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CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-08-08 02:52 PM

Hey. This is the other one that I wrote while I was up camping. Doesn't really need an explanation... Let me know what you think!

SHARI

Sitting here by an open fire
At the beach with so much to do
Fresh air, soft breeze
Yet my mind is stuck on you

Every time I see Goodwill
Or a "Sharis'" resteraunt sign
It makes me start missing you
And wishing you were mine

Every time a wave crashes
It reminds me of my heart you broke
Just like that open fire
That's now turned to smoke

But every time the tide comes in
It has to go back out
And the embers still glowing red
Remind me what love is all about

Just as time tide always comes in
A fire can be rekindled, too
A fire that is deep inside my heart
A fire that is burning for you

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

[This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (edited 08-08-2001).]

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

1 posted 2001-08-08 03:01 PM

This poem is very good and I realy enjoyed it keep up the awsome wrok!
Lauren

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-08-08 03:29 PM

"Just as time tide always comes in
A fire can be rekindled, too"
Very nice write, Cody.
Time well spent while camping. HeHe

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2001-08-08 05:21 PM

Great job here Cody. I enjoyed this one a lot. Another poem well written

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-08-08 07:39 PM

"But every time the tide comes in
It has to go back out
And teh embers still glowing red
Remind me what love is all about"

VERY true. I really enjoyed this... The flow and rhyme was very well done, and the message was awesome. My fave stanza was the one i copied on here. That has so much truth to it... wowsers. Nicely done!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

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