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Christmas comes early this year.
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Christmas comes early this year. |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
sitting by the fire driking som hot coco friends are reunited one big family we are standing under the misseltog kissing watching the snow fall so gently. me and you together a slay ride in the park holding loving kissing uh yeah christmas shopping under the christmas hearts feeling the smell of chestnutts flouding through the air. Christmas love, christmas time comes early this year. christmas star, christmas lights laughter joyfull tears christmas comes early this year. Every house is totaly covert in snow with smoke coming from thier chimnees the angels are falling with this glow in the silent night so beautifully. me and you together ice skating in the park standing falling dancing uh yeah the big christmas trees with the christmas star standing in the middle of everything tonight. Christmas love, christmas time comes early this year. christmas star, christmas lights laughter joyfull tears christmas comes early this year. Merry christmas all around the world merry christmas to all boys and girls Merry christmas to each and every one young and old join us in this christmas song. Christmas love, christmas time comes early this year. christmas star, christmas lights laughter joyfull tears christmas comes early this year. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job. This really fits within a Holiday mood but since there's no Holiday going on it's weird hehe. I did like it though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
LOL, I agree with Dopes, it was a little strange reading about Christmas in the summertime. Hehe.. I liked this. Nicely done! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
good poem, i wish it was christmas lol |
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