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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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ok well here are two poems that are connected although you might not understand why. The skies were blue sun shining onto the immortal earth. streams were flowing flowing on their endless jpurney. the world was at peace with itself. The sun shone on the chared remains of humans, Buildings no longer stood. FLowers bloomed on the chared earth. Black, blue, red were their leaves WHite were their buds The skies remained blue sun shone on Streams continued to flow on their endless journey. The world was dead. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Light of night come bring your glory glory on to gods creators of killers bring light on to their feet work by kill by let it be sunny today bombs will fall no clouds please clouds bring no bombs peace will reign in the storm let there be light let there be death. Regina Levy If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
WOAH! Now this was just awesome! I loved the style in whic you wrote this. VERY very very awesome poem here. I loved it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I did see some connection in the 2 poems, but it may not be what you are referring to. Anyway, I liked these poems. Especially the 2nd one. Nicely done. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
damn, this was really interesting. i love how you wrote them as well. i can definetly see a connection between the two poems. great job on these, you never cease to impress me. -fear- i'm a penguin! i'm a penguin! i'm a cute lil penguiiiin! i'm a penguin i'm a penguin! i eat FISH!--tis the pretty penguin song |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
this is amazing as usual regi..i did see the connection in the poem and it reminded me of "hiroshima"- a book i had read in highschool..there were details about the earth growing again and flowers overtaking the burnt roads..thats what sprung to mind when i read this..i loved the second half of it too-your poem almost always holds a message and i think you did this excellently in this poem...keep writing..i love your stuff  "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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thedragonthomas Junior Member
since 2001-07-30
Posts 15 |
hey, awsome poems! i saw a connection, very well writen yours was yuh! well ill see ya later eh? bye bye |
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Low Man's Lyric Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 236In a dream |
Very creative, I really enjoyed them and I saw a connection between the two. Anyway great job Ina, 'till your next. "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow.. all I can say is *click* There it goes.. into the library.. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Wow, quite beautiful in a subtle, quiet kind of way...the way you describe a light scene and then tell of darker things...creates a nice foil. Well done, yet again! -Leah Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I like the way you write two different poems and connect them this way. It really shows your talent. The fact that you created a lighter side then a darker side to life really stood out here. One was pleading and the other was just telling a story. Very well done Regina. You should be proud of this one. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was awesome Ina. I don't know how I missed this one. They were both great but the second one was absolutely awesome! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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