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Snooganzmeister32
Member

since 2001-07-17

Posts 67
Cali, USA

0 posted 2001-07-29 08:32 PM

~MUSIC~

I am sitting in a corner, crying
I sit there for hours, not making a sound
I think very hard with a blank look on my face
I hear screaming and crying in my head
It sounds like music
So loud
So beautiful
I could dance
But I cant move my body to get up
In my mind I see a dancing demon holding a bloody knife
He is smiling at me
So I wave
Am I insane?
I see blood
Slowly dripping into the fiery pits of hell
I hear an evil laugh
And realize it’s just my screaming
I might be going crazy
But I really like this creepy music

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

1 posted 2001-07-29 09:03 PM

This is a really creepy, uneasy piece for me.. But for some odd reason I'm really liking it. It's very different. Interesting. The emotion on this was was displayed wonderfully. Great job!

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

2 posted 2001-07-29 10:20 PM

Yikes.  Excuse me whilst I shiver a while.
There, done for now.  Wow. this was good.  The mindset is very original.

PS, are you a Kevin Smith fan?  I notice the name.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

Wicced_Witch
Member

since 2000-02-06

Posts 110
Clarksville, TN, USA

3 posted 2001-07-30 12:24 PM

It was kind of creepy, yet very good at the same time. Emotional, I loved it.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-07-30 01:15 AM

I liked this one. I haven't seen yer poetry around so i'll just welcome you. Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed the poem! I hope to see you post here in the future!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

5 posted 2001-07-30 11:49 AM

wow. *hair on the back of my neck rises* this was good, disturbing but good.

Regina

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-08-04 02:14 AM

I really like this... I haven't seen much of you around, but I hope I see more soon! I loved this poem. Music can have such an effect on the soul.. Nicely done!

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

bOoGaSuGa
Member

since 2001-08-03

Posts 54

7 posted 2001-08-04 03:15 AM

wow lol

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