Teen Poetry #5 |
My heart only beats for you |
Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
You’re eyes are bluer than blue Sliding gently by. You’re skin is softer than dug Rising so high. It feels so good when I look at you It feels so good when you hold me Time changes but, You will always be the same to me. My heart only beats for you Your tears are my life. My heart only beats for you You’re always by my side. My heart only beats for you Your soul are my eyes. My heart only beats for you Your mind are my light. My heart only beats for you. Your sweet love are my heaven Flouting on passion. Your sweet voice are my defends Uh just imagine. It feels so good when I look at you It feels so good when you hold me Time changes but, You will always be the same to me. My heart only beats for you Your tears are my life. My heart only beats for you You’re always by my side. My heart only beats for you Your soul are my eyes. My heart only beats for you Your mind are my light. My heart only beats for you. Ta da da da, Ta da da da da dap. Ta da da da, Ta da da da da da dap. My heart only beats for you Ta da da da, Ta da da da da dap Ta da da da, Ta da da da da da dap. My heart only beats for you Ta da da da da da da dap. My heart only beats for you Your tears are my life. My heart only beats for you You’re always by my side. My heart only beats for you Your soul are my eyes. My heart only beats for you Your mind are my light. My heart only beats for you. My heart only beats for you Your tears are my life. My heart only beats for you You’re always by my side. My heart only beats for you Your soul are my eyes. My heart only beats for you Your mind are my light. My heart only beats for you. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This sounds like a good acoustic love song. That ta-da stuff kinda weirded me out, but I thought it'd fit nicely in a song. Well done. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Very sweet love song. I agree- it would be an awesome acoustic song. All love songs are the best when acoustic. HeHe... To me at least. Anyway- Off I go! Thanks for the read. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree with Jesa, acoustic works best with love songs. Very nicely done, I really enjoyed this, and it seems like it'd make an awesome song. Good job! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Trina Member
since 2001-06-28
Posts 97 |
Oh man, I gotta agree with everyone else on this one. It makes a beautiful love song. Thanx for sharing this Take care, Trina |
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bOoGaSuGa Member
since 2001-08-03
Posts 54 |
good job |
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