Teen Poetry #5 |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
![]() ![]() My life is full of words I'll never understand, Such as; I love you, I want to be with you, Can we be just friends? These words are so confusing, Sentances so complex, One minute it's: We're soulmates, The next; I want this to end. Why do we do this to ourselves, Can't we see we're ripping each other apart? Why can't we just say what we feel, Or don't we know where to start?? Punk Angel |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
i know this isnt all that great but my very close friend inspired me to write it!! |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought it was fine and it made sense, but it wasn't your best. Anyhow, I agree...sometimes people just need to say what they truly feel and let go of these petty games. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
dopey i agree with u, sum of us( hint hint angel) need 2 get rid of petty games and false actions, i know u al 2 well 2 say the least. and u know this. ~sabriel stupidity should be painful |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
ugh ugh.....men!!!..they are the MOST frustating creature to walk this earth!!!..... "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
you know what "Can we be just friends?" that line really is horrible. but ya we all ought to just spit everything out! Regina ps Great poem! |
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JBaker515![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
This was good...i enjoyed the read~ ~Jeff~ |
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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
thanks all for replying, and staci, no ur not the one who inspired me to write it!! lol sorry, ur not my only close friend!! but u r one of my best friends!! we love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back?? |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I think everyone can relate to this one. I really liked this... I liked the ending. This situation is all too familiar with me. Nicely done! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Terryloveiris_85 Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 61The middle of nowhere |
well, i really liked this one alot. great job kris. ![]() ~iris i'd give eternity to be by your side-goo goo dolls/City of Angels soundtrack |
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