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Punk Angel Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 66Pennsylvania, US |
When I close my eyes, I see you there. I wish I could touch you, Run my fingers through your hair. But it's like a fantasy, Only a dream. You completely ignore me, Block me out it seems. I wish you could see, All the love I have to share. But then I open my eyes, And you're not there. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Let me be the first to welcome you to PIP!! I don't know any fancy html tricks so my greeting is a little less flashy than everyone else's. Fabulous first post by the way. I liked how it came full circle in the end. Good job ![]() "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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DarkAngelOfTheStars Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 255 |
I liked this! great first post and welcome to passions! cant wait to see more! ![]() story of my life: I am so self destructive, I turn solutions into problems. Everything i touch i ruin. Im midas in reverse |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well done on this one! Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed this very much! I hope to see you post more in the future. Check your e-mail for a special message! Dopey_Dope/Moderator ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you [This message has been edited by Dopey_Dope (edited 07-26-2001).] |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
HELLO AND WELCOME! Thought your first post and great! You didn't write a long @ss post...you made it short and simple and I thought it rocked. Can't wait to read more from ya! "Time really does fly by and no one knows where it goes, so if you have something to say or do, say or do it now." |
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Jessica![]()
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
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since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!... wonderful first post...nice flow...and the last stanza was my fav and hit me home...great job!...as i hope to see you read, share and reply...bye ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
But then I open my eyes, And you're not there. this is sad but nice at the same time...i liked this poem a lot.....welcome to the wonderful world of passions punk!!! "Killer in me is a killer in you, my love |
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Sabriel.s.h.lover Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 73b.f.e. aka- Hickville |
.......welcome my friend.....sad first post but a good one...... ![]() ~sabriel stupidity should be painful |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Your poem was so sad and it was a great first post to start off with. It was short, simple and very to the point. That person is missing out on a lot not to notice what u have to share...good job!! Keep em coming and i cant wait to see more from you! |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
WELCOME!! really enjoyed your post too ALLIE |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
Welcome! I hope you like it here! Great first post! I like the last stanza, made a strong impact on me. Hope to see more of your work! ![]() I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Very nice first post.. strong in emotions! Nice descriptions, I enjoyed this. I hope tos ee more posts and replies from you soon! --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
I liked this poem. I'm relating to it very well right now! I'm not an awesome writer but I wanna ask if you'll please read my latest post ~ Dream Weaver ~ I really loving posting my poetry here because everybody is sooo nice when telling me about it. Your as good as you make yourself out to be!! |
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