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Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-07-24 08:44 PM

It’s never enough is it?!
Everything I do,
Never good enough for you!

Maybe I’m not as good as you,
Ever think of that?
Go ahead, crush me like a rat!

Why can’t you encourage me?
See what I’ve done right!
I hate you! I love you!
Why’d we have to have this fight!?

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Even reading this, I wonder if he'll get the point...I just had a fight with my dad about the usual subject..

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

Tamma

Senior Member

since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

1 posted 2001-07-24 09:05 PM

OMG I have felt like saying these exact words to both my mom and dad at one point in tyme, at least one of us has the nerve to put it into words!

"A friend's shoulder makes a
nice pillow when you're crying" ~Me
"If beauty is in the eye of the beholder, I guess love is too" ~Me

DarkenedShadow
Member

since 2001-07-23

Posts 114
Kansas

2 posted 2001-07-24 09:47 PM

The guts and the skills... seems you got it. Takes some guts to say this when you probaly are angry... I know mine would have been different. I like this it motivates me for more... /Nick/

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-24 11:52 PM

I Hate you, I love you.
Damn those blasted feelings. Felt that anger/rage/frustration before many times... Nice vent.

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

4 posted 2001-07-25 03:56 PM

Great poem keep up the awsome work!
Lauren

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

5 posted 2001-07-26 02:34 AM

Wow, a lot of power in this poem. I felt it hard. Raw emotions here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

6 posted 2001-07-26 10:26 AM

Actually..I think this poem may be turning things around between me and Dad. He went back and looked at my website and saw the poem. We had this long talk that -didn't- turn into a yell-fest..so I guess things are going in the right direction. My life is definitely looking up.

-Kosetsu

"Love, like the Rose, is desired. And like the Rose, Love has its thorns." - Unknown

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

7 posted 2001-07-30 11:41 PM

I'm really glad that things are looking up for you... I liked this poem. Awesome way to vent. I hope it made you feel better. I'm glad that our realtionship with your dad is getting better

I hope things never stop improving, as there is always room for improvment in anything. Nicely done, I enjoyed this one, Adam

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning.

Jessica

Member

since 2001-06-28

Posts 350
South AL

8 posted 2001-07-31 12:33 PM

Adam ~ I am so happy that things are better between you and your dad. I told you things could only get better... *hugs*

I love you...

What don't kill you can only make you stronger...

Love you, Adam!! :)

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

9 posted 2001-08-01 03:16 AM

misunderstanding comes in many ways...i can relate to this...well done on expressing it.

"if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take" - when thugs cry-

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

10 posted 2001-08-15 05:46 PM

Great expression used...I relate, I like this poem alot! great job on it.
-lili

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