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For Him ::think he'll like it?::
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For Him ::think he'll like it?:: |
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a.k.a.maLa Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 15Florida, USA |
His words So soft and smiling Could purge any fear The way his voice cradles my insecurities So warm and firey To melt the coldest of pains His essence is my security blanket His smile could send me home He took me to the places I never knew The places where all the veins meet Snatched up my fears Shook away my illness He murdered my doubt I could fly a million miles in my mind We collapse and he's yet to run The future of "together" is... So unpredictable now I possess unyielding faith That if we are meant to shine once more Fate shall smile down on us No matter how we're destined to shine What we share will never be erased Unbreaking bond of friendship |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
WEll then in all honesty you lost me for a few in the middle of the poem, but thats okay the whole thing made up for it anyway. /Nick/ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Awww Jenn I really liked this. Very sweet. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think this is indeed very sweet. I enjoyed this one.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful words! "What we share will never be erased/Unbreaking bond of friendship" Very sweet... I really enjoyed this! Nicely done. --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is really good and sweet. I loved it! katie "by takeing no risks you are really risking everything" |
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