Teen Poetry #5 |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I could say a million things, but I don't know if you'd come back, or if you'd even care enough to try. And I don't cry to you anymore, because you can't change the past, and I don't want to live inside a lie. But if I said "I love you", you better believe that it's the truth, but I still don't know if you would care. I wonder sometimes, that if I needed you someday, would you even be there? I wonder sometimes, if you'd pick up the pieces I drop, and hold onto them, tight. And if I let the tears fall out, would you pick them up, and just say it's alright? They tell me that you know, so there's no need to tell you, but if you don't know, just ask. They say you know I love you, so I guess there's no need to say it, but if you don't know, just ask. If you ever need a friend, I can be that for you, if you can be that for me. And if you need someone to talk to, no matter what time of day, that someone I will be. I need you to help me fly, to help me leave this crazy life, to help me to be a good girl again. I need you to not let go, to help me out in many ways, to always be a friend. If you ever need me, boy, I'll be there, day or night. And if you're ever hurt or alone, if you stumble and fall, I'll help you through every fight. They say you know I love you, but if you happen to forget, and you need me to remind you, just ask, They say you know I love you, but if you need to remember that, just look at me and know I'll always be there, all you have to do is hold onto me if I fall, and if you ever need anything, just ask. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
omg i absolutely love this!! and i can't believe i'm first to reply LOL i especially love the last stanza. it just brought it all together... oh i love this one so much! haha GREAT SUPER DUPER JOB!!!!! Love Valerie "...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
sis!! u r soo good!!!! i wish i didnt have this part time dead brain...wonderful poem! "I have no never-again, I have no always" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Allysa- This is really beautiful... Such lovely thoughts you've penned and you've done it so well.. Wonderful write! smiles, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-23-2001).] |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
I wish there was someone out like this writing to me... whoever it is their lucky. Good work and good job, really got to me. /Nick/ |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Allysa... I LOVED this. I can relate bunches. You did an absolutely wonderful job on this one. |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Thanks ya all. It's just another Justin poem, as always. Hmm, somehow, I don't know if he'd even care to read it anymore. Anyways, Darkened Shadows, it sounds like someone should write you a good poem sometime. Everyone deserves one. However, I'm still waiting for mine. Unfortunatly, Justin's not a poet. Oh well, if he just asks me back out it'll be good enough. Someone once taught me that it doesn't matter what other people think of you as long as you like yourself. That's what I live by. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here Allysa. I really liked this one. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
very expressive Allysa You're impressing me more and more keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
very nice, lots of heart spoken words in it Only darkness falls on those without souls |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I thought this was absolutely beautifully written You did a great job on this...it was sad and caring at the same time. Wonderful |
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allie Member
since 2001-07-09
Posts 218Australia |
I really liked this... Loved the: I wonder sometimes, if you'd pick up the pieces I drop, and hold onto them, tight. bit... its really sweet! i dont know what to say about the boy though! Good luck with whatever you chose to do! ALLIE |
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