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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL 
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Someday you'll know me Maybe it'll be too late When you do Don't hesitate I've let it all show So crystal clear Don't regret it It was my fear When you understand things You can finally forget me Don't let it hurt you I only wish you could see You didn't think I would follow through I could see it in your eyes Don't let it get to you I know the thoughts you despise No this wasn't about a break-up but I had rather not say what it was about... You can figure it out. What don't kill you can only make you stronger... |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Hmm...actually, I don't think it gives the feel about a breakup. More along the lines of people not seeing you the way you want to be seen. I seem to be going through a thing about that lately. Everyone sees the picture of you that they want to see, not the true you inside. Anyway, maybe I'm wrong. This was a nice one. Not as good as No Way Out, but I liked it still. -Kosetsu "Eat, drink, and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Shakespeare |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I agree w/ Kosetsu- Thats what I thought it was about either. Anyway- I didn't like this as much as your others...I dunno...Just something about it. Thanks for the read though.  |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Not as good as some of your previous work, but it was a good read nonetheless. I eagerly await more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Marshalzu 
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Good work I really enjoyed the read  Andrew |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
quite heartfelt...the emotions were nicely expressed...i liekd it...bye Jess#2  im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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DarkenedShadow Member
since 2001-07-23
Posts 114Kansas |
It doesn't seem to be over a breakup at all, maybe about something you wanted someone to see if but for one second in time. Maybe thats it.... I hope in a way /Nick/ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Jessica, Very interesting poem. I would like a little explanation to it though. I believe these kind of poems can only be understood if the situation is actually known by the readers. But if you would rather keep it to yourself, don't feel bad about it. That's you decision and we have to respect that. Keep sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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