Teen Poetry #5 |
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Fly awai( new song) |
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Mykels_Angel Junior Member
since 2001-06-25
Posts 38australia |
Let me fly, I hate it here I want to try my wings You know I'm strong, Don't hold me back You know you're not being fair You're not weak, But you won't be strong. You don't need me, But you just can't Let me fly. Lighting, darkness I am falling from the sky. I don't feel it anymore. There is light at the end of the tunnel. It's not out of reach anymore. I can feel it on my finger tips, in my toes. Oozing out my heart And running through my veins Let me run through the trees Let my fly through the breeze. Let me dance in the clouds, Let my play in the flowers. Let me please take your hand And fly into the clouds, For your my guy and you know it And i want far away from here |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
That's a really nice song. I know how it feels to want to just get away. I think you did a really good job. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
That's really good. Sometimes it really would be nice to be able to just fly away from everything. Unfortunately you can't and u have to deal with stuff. Good job. - Cody - |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I agree with Cody here. I've dreamed about being able to fly.. just being able to fly away whenever and be by myself. It would be so nice.. I really enjoyed this. nicely done. Thanks for the awesome read ![]() --Marie You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I liked this. I know how it feels to just want to be w/ the person you love, alone, away from people, troubles, worries...life. Nice song. ![]() |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
nice song...its VERY true...just want to get away from everything...great job on writing it, Sarah ![]() im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was nice. I liked it. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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