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Teen Poetry #5

See Your Love Through

Winston Froom
Junior Member

since 2001-11-28

Posts 32

0 posted 2002-09-11 05:41 PM

//Excuses to my mates for this pop poem. I did try for it to be a Gallagherian type of pop though :}

See Your Love Through

Leave your fashion of reason
there's no need for much ado.
Though I'm not for all seasons-
Tonight, you need to see your love through.

Cast away your stale manner
don't you know your time is due?
It's much too late to read the banner-
Tonight, you need to see your love through.

Hold your body laws of motion
the opposing conditions I withdrew.
Even if you still don't have a notion-
Tonight, you need to see your love through.

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

1 posted 2002-09-12 11:37 PM

Truly a great poem. I liked the phrase "stale manner". I commend you.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

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