Teen Poetry #5 |
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Bag of Marbles |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden ![]() |
Start Here walk away enter throught the golden gates and let everything fly out the window because the broken ring on my finger can not justify anything anymore the wall has fallen the city torn down yesterday cannot compare to the stomped feelings to the rubble in my head. Let the bag of marbels fall. I hope you trip. ich bin schwul, ich bin jüdisch und ein Kommunist dazu, Ich bin schwarz und behindert, doch genauso Mensch wie du ~Wizo |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Wow, whatever he did, it's really bad. I like the poem though! It's really well written! Keep up the good work! Hope to read more! Later! -Rich After Love comes Pain, then Love, Then Pain, then Love, then Pain..... does anyone else see a pattern here? Oh well, can't say it's not worth it. |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
so you're cranky then. this is really good you can feel the emotion steaming off it. good work! hope it helped you feel better. |
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EleanorMoonbaby Member
since 2002-09-02
Posts 202England, UK |
I liked this. I think we all have people we want to trip over on marbles! This was really well written. In the beginning, the Universe was made. This has angered a lot of people and has been widely regarded as a bad move- Douglas Adams |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
hrmm...dang...frustration, anger seething through your words..and whatever verbs and adjectives and whatnot ![]() Kristen If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Surprisingly enough, I'm not mad, I was not mad when I wrote this and there was not anything that occured to make me write this. This is just a random piece of work. Thank you all. ich bin schwul, ich bin jüdisch und ein Kommunist dazu, Ich bin schwarz und behindert, doch genauso Mensch wie du ~Wizo |
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