Teen Poetry #5 |
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Expression tell me what you think its an interesting poem |
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Guardurthoughts Member
since 2001-10-16
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Confusion from exclusion Depression from confession Agony to Mutiny A kinship faced to hardship A Complication that can not be pardoned The echo’s of sorrow drift in the mind of a soul confined Let the sound of a hate crashing to the ground… Ring, in all ears with a drastic warning. Confusion to exclusion Depression to confession Aggression left an impression, On all who tried to question her expression. ~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~ |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem, the langauge is just amazing and I really enjoyed the read ![]() Andrew "I still feel the pain in my heart, what once was pure is now diluted" - Biffy Cylro |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Yes, interesting might be the appropriate word. I liked the way you worded this. ![]() Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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