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zarina
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since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

0 posted 2001-07-16 06:30 AM

at nigth, when you're alone..
do you ever miss me?
wonder what will be?
do you need me?
..do you ever need to hear my voice?
do you ever smile -for me-?
do you ever cry -for me-?
do you ever laugh -for me-?
..do I really ligth your way...?

I'd forgotten how this feels
To need
To belive
So Long Ago
So Far Away
Now I Remember
And Now It's For You

do you ever lay awake at nigth..
..thinking of me..?
do you ever long for my touch?
do you ever long to feel warmth?
do you think of me?
do you want my love?
..do you ever shiver, do you ever blink?

   Tell Me
     Oh Baby
      Tell Me

I want to see what you see
I want to hear what you hear
I want to taste what you taste
..Feel what you Feel..

do you know it?
..what you do to me..
I dont care what other may think
I need your love-like I need to be
I want to love you..
Do I ask for too much..?
my love..I cant let you go..

So Baby
Wont you think of me?
Wont you talk to me?
..Let it be..
..Please..Smile to me..

I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you?

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

1 posted 2001-07-16 07:34 AM

amazing work,

i can really relate to what you're feeling

ALLIE

destiny502
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since 1999-11-23

Posts 57
OH

2 posted 2001-07-16 03:39 PM

this is like something i would write..only i could never write it like this

its like what i think, and i dont know how to say it. so heartfelt i love it

Love can sometimes be like magic, but magic can sometimes..just be illusion

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

3 posted 2001-07-16 07:35 PM

Not my favorite of your posts, Zarina.
Yet still- an outstanding piece that I can relate to. Do you live in my head? hehehe

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-07-16 08:51 PM

i can realte...this hit me...i really liked this poem...filled with emotions...i think you expressed this very well, great job!, Carina

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-07-16 10:06 PM

You write with such deep emotions, Carina. I enjoyed this just as much as your others. Nicely done.

--Marie

You think yourself a failure, but perhaps the biggest loss is winning...

zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

6 posted 2001-07-17 04:43 AM

thank you for responding..

It means a lot to me. And Im glad that I can write poems that people can relate to.. my poems, well, they're just like my thougths..so, I guess humans are not so different that we like to belive.. wellwell. (and excuse my terrible english please..

)

I am always myself. Isn't that enough for you?

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-07-19 01:04 AM

I liked it, it had a lot of power in it.
I think this rocked.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

CwboyAtHeart
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 541
Selah, WA, USA

8 posted 2001-07-19 02:23 AM

It had a lot of power and emotion in it, I liked a lot. I can also relate to it a little bit. Great write.

      - Cody -

Note To Self:  If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!!

If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid?

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

9 posted 2001-07-20 11:12 PM

I liked the parts where you did, -for me-. It made it stand out a bit more and read it more dramatically.

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Psychopathic chickens are plotting against me...

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