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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2002-08-29 02:54 PM

Walking
quiet tree lined trails
shodowed in your memory,
I feel you here
reaching for me
just beyond the trees
wanting.

My name
whispers from your lips
as the wind
moves in the trees.
I turn,
shadows move,
your ghost
follows me.

My favorite place
now feels cold,
empty of the warmth
once held
vacant....
cold.

come to me...
walk again in the sun
withe me at your side,
share the shadows,
bring me peace
bring me ... you

I miss you

____________________________________________

i wrote this a long time ago .. i just never really liked it lol

*!~!* Andrea *!~!*
soon to be mother

[This message has been edited by SunShine913 (08-29-2002 03:23 PM).]

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

1 posted 2002-08-29 02:55 PM

This is a really nice poem. I really liked it.
Allison

Acies

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-09-12 03:29 PM

very sweet indeed
one of my favorites of your writes
hope to see more of your work
thanks for the read

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

Muys
Member

since 2002-04-06

Posts 389
The Netherlands

3 posted 2002-09-12 08:32 PM

              Com to me
        Walk again in the sun
        With  me at your side
         Share the shadows
          Bring me-----You

I miss you
~~~* *~~~

Why don't you like It?
In that time
You where a youn girl
It is a lovely poem dear
For young and old

from a Old Lady Muys

[This message has been edited by Muys (09-12-2002 08:42 PM).]

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

4 posted 2002-09-12 10:57 PM

I had to tell you, the imagery in your poem is beautiful. I felt it.

*~Meredith~*

"I can taste you on my lips
and smell you in my clothes"
*BHS

TradingSpaces19
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

5 posted 2002-09-14 04:30 PM

Andrea,

This is really good. Good Job. I felt what you meant in the poem, You're other poems are good too. Thank you for sharing it.

Andrea Kruckenberg (TradingSpaces19)

Babygirl2069
New Member

since 2002-09-15

Posts 1
Upstate, SC

6 posted 2002-09-15 09:53 AM

this is very nice.. my bf broke up with me last night, so this one is good to me. thanks for sharing!

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