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Hello Love |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
"Hello Love" © 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved Hello love, Is it me you're looking for? Oh, it's not? No, she lives on the first floor. Good luck to you too! Once again, The arrow missed my heart. Fight in vain, I'll never reach my distend star! Wish my life were through.... Hello love, You went past my door again! Hey! well, but! No, I understand, more pain! Yeah, maybe next time! It's hurtful, To see love revolve 'round me. It's so cold, I hear ice break when I breathe. Please give me a sign.... Hello, did you put me on the "laundry" list? Why don't I ever get to experience the "first" kiss? Hello love, Oh, you have something for me! But I thought? Go to 42 second street? Ok, thanks a lot So I did, And there were the girl of me dreams. So that's it, My heart got it's magic beans. I finally fell in love... Hello love.... |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I thought that that was a really beautiful poem. It sounds like the story of my life.lol well keep writing because you are verygood at it.  Allison |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Hi Allison, thanks for your reply! ...."It sounds like the story of my life".... you're not the first to say that about it! Must people I know can relate to it, and that's just a plus. lol Thanks again! Best Wishes, Brian. |
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