Teen Poetry #5 |
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Just For You ( Please Read ) |
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Riley![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-18
Posts 1038in the pouring rain ![]() |
deep down i know true feelings surge i now am drowning your silent words smelling your sweat watching you breath is almost more than i can ever take sweet surrender smiling so bitterly around my heart a shiny glass plate if you try and break the bond of parts then you shall find my surpassing love try hard to find a place like i know you want to seemingly mindless i find that it is to hard for me to grasp my love my undying love simple minded is it what is within it shall be for you <3 No guy is worth your tears, and when you find one that is, he won't make you cry <3 [This message has been edited by Riley (08-28-2002 10:11 PM).] |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I think that this poem is really wonderful and especially the litte quote tyou had at the bottom it really touched me and i hope that you keep writing. As long as you keep writing i`ll keep reading. Allison |
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Buttafly_Kiss New Member
since 2002-09-01
Posts 3Tx, USA |
Very well written poem I loved it! Thank you so much for sharing it and if you would please contact me when you write some more I would love to read them!! |
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