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LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

0 posted 2002-08-26 04:48 PM

"With You"

All i want
is to hold you near

all i want
is to have you here

some say
that it can't be
because we are
to far apart

all i want
is to hold you near

all i want
is to have you here

but if they could
see inside my heart
they would see that
though the miles
may be long
we are never
far apart
because
i hold you
within my heart

all i want
is to hold you near

all i want
is to have you here

But as i drift
off to sleep
i look within
my heart
and i am
with you again

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

1 posted 2002-08-26 04:58 PM

I know just how you feel and I understand that some people might be sceptical about a long distance relationship but if it's meant to be no amount of distance will be able to keep you apart.

The poem was just great, I really liked the style that you employed and I enjoyed the read so thank you for sharing

Andrew

Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal

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Baby_Angel123
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 63
Unity, ME

2 posted 2002-08-26 06:04 PM

I loved your poem. I can really relate to it. keep up the good work!

~Angel~

If you love something, let it go, if it comes back 2 u, its urs, if it doesnt, it never wuz. ~ DMX

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

3 posted 2002-08-26 06:06 PM

Liked it

I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

LoneWolf
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

4 posted 2002-08-26 06:48 PM

thank you all for your replies

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.
I've learned that even when you th

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

5 posted 2002-09-06 11:12 PM

"but if they could
see inside my heart
they would see that
though the miles
may be long
we are never
far apart
because
i hold you
within my heart"

Hey there..
Great poem..so true.. so real.
It's nice to know and hear real emotions and feelings around here.
Keep writing.. you have something.
(Nice pic by the way...

)

~Sara

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