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branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

0 posted 2001-07-15 10:03 PM

The love i dont want,
Belongs to only you,
The love i dont want,
Yest its very True,
The love i dont want,
Is the blackness of your heart,
The love i dont want,
Can only come from you,
The love i dont want,
Is yours cus you've hurt me so many other times,
The love i dont want,
Is only cus it hurts,
The love i dont want,
Yes its your love,
Your not like the dove i thought you were,
Dark,evil,and everything between,
I want nothing to do with you,
Little queen bee,
You think your so tough,
But deep down your not,
I could take you out in one shot,
But i swore i never would,
I loved and showed you i did,
And u treated me like a kid,
Its all over now and im happy as can be,
Your the one mourning now,
Im sorry to say but all i can do is laugh at you now,
This is the end of our time, your time and mine.
Together never again will it be,
Just remember i did once love you my little miss bee.
(when i said *Shot* not by anymeans would i mean to actually shoot someone i mean like if i was to punch them which i could never do either its just an expression but it didnt sound right so i thought i would clear itu p)

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

[This message has been edited by branden726 (edited 07-15-2001).]

stace_co2003
Member

since 2001-03-30

Posts 497
In a dream world

1 posted 2001-07-15 11:03 PM

*tsk, tsk, tsk*

Branden, I thought you knew better than to go around shooting ppl. *shakes head* I can't believe it!! lol, anyway, I like this poem!!

though it is kinda sad

oh well!! heehee, catcha later!

I LOVE ZU, hey Albie, Cody, Allan, Carly, Cherish, Lizzy, Kris, *HUGS JAVI*, Tamma, Acire, and Branden.
*HUGS ZU*

Mykels_Angel
Junior Member

since 2001-06-25

Posts 38
australia

2 posted 2001-07-15 11:15 PM

this is really good
keep up the good work!

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

3 posted 2001-07-15 11:21 PM

Well ya know i couldnt harm a fly and everyone here knows that

so there and thanx for your replie although yes it is sad.

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-07-16 04:03 PM

Although I liked this, Branden, I think I've read better from you. The rhyme scheme here is very sporadic. Nonetheless, thanks for sharing. Enjoyed, as always.

--Marie

You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds.

Alexia

Member

since 2001-06-07

Posts 164
Sweet And Sassy

5 posted 2001-07-16 06:03 PM

It wuz a good poems Branden.

Keep it up!
Alexia

If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you?

Shygirl82
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 245
Ilinois

6 posted 2001-07-17 03:23 AM

I was feelin this one...so I liked it alot...until next time...
~Nikki~

It takes only a minute to like someone, a hour to love someone, but a lifetime to forget them.

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

7 posted 2001-07-17 08:55 AM

Thanx guys and yes you all have read better from me but im still in the proscess of getting the feeling for poetry back.

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

8 posted 2001-07-17 01:59 PM

a lot of bitterness...well i liked it...good job, Branden

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-07-17 07:18 PM

Hey Mr.B......this about your GF? If so then gee sounds like yer going through some rough times. If this is about some Bee....then...ok haha. I enjoyed the poem, thought it was nice.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

10 posted 2001-07-22 02:44 AM

I really like this one from you, Branden. It shows your true emotions and how much this horrid girl put you through.
Fave line: "Dark,evil,and everything between,"
It reminded me of someone I know. Heh...

Thanks for the read.

~AF~

Tearless grief bleeds inwardly.
~ Christian Nevell Bovee ~

allie
Member

since 2001-07-09

Posts 218
Australia

11 posted 2001-07-22 05:07 AM

ouch... because i've been there, but as the "love you dont want"... with my ex...
I can therefore relate to this... and its quite an emotional peice...

Fabulous work though

ALLIE

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

12 posted 2001-07-22 11:51 PM

Thanks for the replies all and guess what its not about me....its about a friend and what he's gone throught......well thanx

All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare!
~*~Branden~*~

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