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Tamma
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0 posted 2002-08-21 05:36 PM


I think back to a few weeks ago
And we were just so happy
And then – two weeks ago
You ended our relationship
For, what seems like no reason at all
I cried – Emotional person, I am…
You said that it embarrassed you
That I cried at your Grandfather’s funeral
Because I was expecting you to be happy
That I took a day off of work
To go down and be with you for that day
But, instead, you broke up with me
In front of your whole family…
I even went to your family reunion the next day
Embarrassed to still be there “Why?” you ask
Sit down and think about it –
What is more embarrassing …

To have your girlfriend cry at a funeral – Or –
To be dumped in front of your boyfriend’s whole family???


Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

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anya
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1 posted 2002-08-21 06:35 PM


hey if he was embaressed by such a natural thing as you crying at a funeral then mabey your better off out of it,
anya

vixengrl04
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2 posted 2002-08-22 02:12 PM


Why was he embarassed that you were crying at a funeral???  I think it's terrible that he broke up with you in front of his whole family and I can only imagine how embarassing and painful that would be.  Good luck, and I'm sorry that this had to happen to you!!

Always,
Nikki

     *~Fighting for your love~*
    *~Is something I cannot do~*
   *~I'm not good enough to win~*
*~And I'm not strong enough to lose~*

skyshine
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3 posted 2002-08-22 04:52 PM


Some people just don't GET it!

~Beth

You look inside my wild mind
never knowing what you'll find
still I want you all the time
yeah I do
'cause you get me
~Michelle Branch

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4 posted 2002-08-22 08:39 PM


He certainly should have been touched by your sign of devotion and compassion! I am terribly sorry to hear this... I hope you keep writing. Thank you for sharing this piece!

~Sky

"Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed

Otaku
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5 posted 2002-08-23 04:44 AM


geEz...i strongly feel you should go to him and shove his face with cow dung or something because he obviously doesn't get you.......he was embarrassed? tell him that Otaku reckons he's a fag..

here's my email: aurora_obsidion@hotmail.com

email me when you have sufficient cow dung..i'll help you in covering his face with it..

"Demon slain, the deed is done...."

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6 posted 2002-08-23 10:45 AM


This is my professional opinion as I've dealt with so many unimaginable jerks in my lifetime I now consider myself a professional...He sucks.

Yep there you go, he sucks. Guys that act like that are very immature and fear intamicy; thus create stupid reasons to break up with their gfriends. It's sad really. I know it hurts now, but life will be better for you in the long run...I promise!!!

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

Tamma
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7 posted 2002-08-23 11:29 AM


Even tho I am now talking to Justin Michael again...I can't stopthinking of how he ended it with me...the way he did it makes me wish he had broken up with me over the phone - that way, I wouldn't have had to deal with his whole family watching over me. I'm sure gonna miss that bunch LoL

Tamma

Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants?

branden726
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8 posted 2002-08-23 01:28 PM


You really wanna know what I think? Too bad im gonna tell you anyways.

I - Insensitive
g - Gimmie (only he counts)
n - No feelings for others.
o - Opinonated
r - Retarded (no offense)
a - Arrogant
n - Negative feelings towards others
c - Captain jackass (can i say that?)
e - Everyone is unimportant but him.

You see IGNORANCE! I had a hard time comming up with somethings to say but tamma... Dont ever and I mean ever put yourself in this position. If I fell out of love with a girl and she went to my granparents funeral I would fall back in love ecspecially if they cried.

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9 posted 2002-08-24 02:05 AM


This guy sounds like an absolute idiot. If he's treating you with such contempt, you're much better off away from him. After all, the more negative a person is, the more likely they are to bring you down.

~M

Imagination=nostalgia for the past, the absent; it is the liquid solution in which art develops the snapshots of reality.

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10 posted 2002-08-24 04:25 AM


eh guys are stupid you can do better

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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