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PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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0 posted 2002-08-20 09:27 PM



Why do i crumble at your words?
"are you there?"
a tear streams...

I'm breaking down, but why?
"are you there?"
it's never got this bad...

Why does my heart scream out at me?
"sara?"
I know that you don't feel...

I never did answer you that night


"Paint your perfect day, I don't mind this. I'm better off by the way - Deeply grounded... You will get yours yours."
-Bush (*cold contagious*)

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1 posted 2002-08-20 10:13 PM


Your writing is so sad. I hope you feel better soon. It makes for good writing, being so upset...but it makes for horrible day-life. You have a way with words

Jenn

Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving?

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
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2 posted 2002-08-20 10:49 PM


A 'thank you' and an 'I'm sorry', both at the same time is what i say to you..

But you're completly right- depression, and whatnot, does make writings much better.
I guess all i have to say is..
sometimes, tragedy is the best way.

thanks again...
-raVen-

"Paint your perfect day, I don't mind this. I'm better off by the way - Deeply grounded... You will get yours yours."
-Bush (*cold contagious*)

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