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Teen Poetry #5

Finish Line

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2002-08-20 07:48 PM

This one might be a little confusing because I am so confused and frustrated right now.

panting
shorten my steps
don't stop
go

you are
standing there
waiting
cheer me forth

finish
done for now
you smile at me
for another moment

you pull
me close to you
our bodies touch
combined as one

our lips burn
as the flesh connects
you pull back
holding me close

you smile at me
whisper sweet
into my ear
you are beautiful

i love you
loving me more
for each day i smile
your lips come again

upon their touch
my body takes over
such to much
loving you this day

To the world you maybe a person, but to a person you maybe the world

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

1 posted 2002-11-28 05:27 AM

quote:
you are
standing there
waiting
cheer me forth

Sounds like you had/have something special in your life. Wish we all had someone to cheer us forth.

Good write dear.

“A single choice can build destinies, or destroy them.”

Getting away, isn't Running away.

"The hurt that you try to hide, is killing me."

Barbara
Junior Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 32

2 posted 2003-03-14 12:36 PM

WOW!!!!!!!!!!
I can really relate to this poem, because I one was that girl to someone... =)))) :*
Its A Great Poem!

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