Teen Poetry #5 |
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BlatantlyImpossible New Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 2 |
Moonlit evenings promises of christmas presents in August you're telling me you'll get me something cool and I feel like your obligation. Talking to you on the phone you promise to get in the shower in five minutes you're telling me you'd like to spend time with me and all the time I feel like your obligation. You tell me to trust you but what made you change your mind? I'm your afterschool hobby. Why waste your time if I'm just an obligation. |
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Kevin![]()
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Hey, I know your excited to be here and all but did you have to kick down our double doors with this entrance ![]() I like this poem alot Its a unique way to look at someone who isnt fully into a relationship anymore welcome to the blue I'm on my feet, I'm on the floor, I'm good to go |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
yes welcome welcome. i enjoyed this alot. i diffently agree with kevin on the entrance thing, this was a great first post. ![]() ~Ur feelings never change, u just learn 2 hide them~ |
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BlatantlyImpossible New Member
since 2002-08-19
Posts 2 |
Thank you both very much. ![]() |
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vixengrl04 Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 495East Haddam, CT |
This was really sad, but I could relate well. It's tough when you feel like somebody is only being "friends" with you because they feel as if they're obligated to. You wrote this very well. ![]() Always, Nikki *~Fighting for your love~* |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hunny you aren't an obligation but i know how relationships can feel like that trust me i been there. check your email you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
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Allysa![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Great Job! Welcome to Passions! ich bin schwul, ich bin jüdisch und ein Kommunist dazu, Ich bin schwarz und behindert, doch genauso Mensch wie du ~Wizo |
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LyricFetish Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 528North Carolina |
"I'm your after-school hobby." Damn. That was well put, very sad but true-to-life in some relationships. Excellent first post! Be cool. *~Meredith~* "I can taste you on my lips |
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