Teen Poetry #5 |
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Justin Michael |
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Tamma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV ![]() |
Anybody remember him, from WAYYYY back when? Well, this one was written for him. (We're even talking about getting back together). I've never given a guy a 2nd chance, but once you read on, you'll understand... I cant believe you’ve come back ~ Into my life after so long. Just like nothing has changed The way you kissed me last night ~ Gave me chills up my spine Just like it always had Your arms holding me tight ~ Flooded me with feelings That I haven’t had in a year and a half. Just sitting in your truck ~ For those 5 short hours And you won my heart over again. Four o’clock in the morning ~ Lying in his truck Being held tightly in his arms. What I just wasn’t expecting ~ Was to hear you say you still loved me And place a kiss on my cheek. When asked how long you’ve known ~ Your answer amazed me “I’ve always known” Once the sun started to show ~ You said you had to go But not before you kissed me once more. I walked into the house, Dazed ~ Feeling like it’d never ended And hoping it wasn’t just a dream. ![]() Have you ever heard that "No shirt, No shoes" rule? My question is...Why doesn't that rule include pants? |
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Savage Quiescence Member
since 2002-07-29
Posts 326Wandering |
Very romantic poem. I am not farmiliar with this format, but you did a very good job with it. ~Sky "Whatever life brings, I've been through everything, but now I'm on my knees again" -Creed |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aww, that is so sweet! I hope things go well for you two and that you're always happy. Good luck ![]() |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
I remember you talking about Justin but that was like ages ago, anyway this is a really well written poem, good luck with your relationship and thank you for sharing this with us ![]() Andrew Mister Zu: A self confessed cannibal |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I remember the mentioning of Justin Micheal, yes. I hope it works out for you, and this was a lovely poem. Paints a real nice picture. ![]() Jenn Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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