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0 posted 2002-08-15 05:06 AM


Hey who took my ten dollar bill?
i felt an ecstatic chill
like a cold excitement running down my thigh

like a childish sugar high
i don't know, i say.
i really didn't need it anyway.
he gave me a curious glance
my thoughts began to dance
they went to the coffee can under my bed

i took it i thought in my head
it isn't the first time it won't be the last
i'm paying you back for things in the past
little girl wasn't that great
i really hate to debate
i really did what i could
if only you had understood.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

© Copyright 2002 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-15 11:49 PM


Is there something you haven't told me? I think that you  did well with this one. I felt that right off the bat you had a quick, snappy rythm, and I like that
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