»
Archives
»
Teen Poetry #5
»
Big Girl!
| Teen Poetry #5 |
|
Big Girl! |
|
punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV 
|
Hey who took my ten dollar bill? i felt an ecstatic chill like a cold excitement running down my thigh like a childish sugar high i don't know, i say. i really didn't need it anyway. he gave me a curious glance my thoughts began to dance they went to the coffee can under my bed i took it i thought in my head it isn't the first time it won't be the last i'm paying you back for things in the past little girl wasn't that great i really hate to debate i really did what i could if only you had understood. you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all |
||
| © Copyright 2002 Robin Hill - All Rights Reserved | |||
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Is there something you haven't told me? I think that you did well with this one. I felt that right off the bat you had a quick, snappy rythm, and I like that  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
