Teen Poetry #5 |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA ![]() |
Hey! I haven't written anything lately, but I was just at the beach where I finally was able to get some inspiration. I really dont know where this one came from, I was just walking along the beach looking at the stars and started writing it... Let me know what you think about it. ![]() SATISFIED I try to be a child of yours In which you can rely Sometimes I will fall short But I get up again and try I hold you close in heart and soul You will never be denied Chorus: I often come to you With questions asking "why?" But that's not the reason That I came tonight You are the only one In which I can confide And I'm not leaving here Until my soul's been satisfied I was not there When you were crucified I could not see Those tears that you cried But I know that my sins and shame Where the reason that you died I come here hungry for you Here I am with my arms open wide I lay down my life for you To your call I’m ready to reply Love, compassion, all that is good Is what I see in your eyes Chorus You are the only one In which I can confide And I'm not leaving here Until my soul's been satisfied - Cody - Note To Self: If Pigs Can Fly, So Can I!!! If someboy laughs at me, does that make me funny or just plain stupid? [This message has been edited by CwboyAtHeart (08-09-2002 12:41 AM).] |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
Great Poem Cody...Maybe I should try the beach for some inspiration. I really liked it!!! I loved this verse: I was not there When you were crucified I could not see Those tears that you cried But I know that my sins and shame Where the reason that you died ~Lisa Did you get a new picture? [This message has been edited by LCBS (08-08-2002 01:58 PM).] |
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Nicholas Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 20Washington , U.S |
I loved it Cody Great job |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem loved it hun keep it up cody! |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
hey, theres nothing like the beach to give you inspiration is there, and i liked this alot, thankyou anya |
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Dustin462 Junior Member
since 2002-08-09
Posts 23Selah, WA |
hey cody i thnk tis is a good poem, i ont really know much abot the faults on petry but otherwise its good Dustin |
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