Teen Poetry #5 |
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The Last Time |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
You had to try it Why? Everyone else was doing it You had to drink it Why? Everyone else was doing it You had to smoke it Why? Everyone else was doing it You had to drive home Why? Everyone else left You hit a car and killed a family Why? Everyone else was driving You said it was the last time Why should I believe you? Because I'm gone... With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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LCBS Senior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 532Connecticut |
I hope that this isnt a story directly related to you, driving under the unfluence of any drink/drug is a terrible thing. You can kill innocent people and ruin your own life. The saddest part about it is how preventable it really is...nice poem! ~Lisa |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
No this piece is not about me at all. Thanx for your reply. <3 Chel With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oy. I'm sooooo not into the drinking and driving thing. Not ever. It's a terrible risk to take. This was a simple but to the point poem. Good work Jenny :-) Why is it that we are at our most ingenius only when trying to destroy the things that keep us alive and thriving? |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Drinking and driving is just ****ing ridiculous. Drinking is fine, but people are so hyped up about "escaping" that they abuse it. Oh yay! Let's all drink til we throw-up! I thought the simplicity of the piece actually helped the message come out clear. Sometimes people trip over words. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos |
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Chel2082 Junior Member
since 2002-07-23
Posts 40Baltimore, MD |
Okay...I have had so bad experiences with alcohol and I know ppl that have been killed by drunk drivers. I am not for it. This piece was not a personal one and I hope that after reading it that you realize the dangers and the consequences. Thanx for the replies and I hope to recieve more. With GOD all things are possible...<3 CHEL |
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