Teen Poetry #5 |
Perfection |
CountryGirl4U New Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 6Sexiest Cowgirl |
Why do guys judge girls on how skinny they are, or how hot they are? Is it in some sort of rule book? Or is it just in there minds? I wish guys would look beneath my looks, to see me for who I am, Not for what I am I may not have the body you want So don't ask me to be perfect No one is perfect Therefore you should take me for who I am This is who I am *Summer* [This message has been edited by CountryGirl4U (edited 07-15-2001).] |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA |
Right on! Guys are jerks. Stay away from guys ...'cept for me. I hate guys who judge girls by looks... And girls who judge guys by their looks. Anyway, I really liked this one, keep writing! - Cody - |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
powerful message, Summer...and you told it straight to the point...i enjoyed it and..and yea...some guys can be shallow. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Guys and Girls are both guilty of this. Naughty us! Nice write Summer. I enjoyed it. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Spice is exactly right. Everyone is guilty of this, whether they'd like to admit it or not. I'm sure many people have looked after a girl or guy and thought "Man, that girl/guy is hot!" The conents of this poem is very true, though. When it comes to looking for that "special someone" too much goes into the looks department. That can cause more than just relationship problems. Nice work, here. I enjoyed the read, and look foward to reading more from you. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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CountryGirl4U New Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 6Sexiest Cowgirl |
Yeah .. I've gone out with guys because of there looks before and BIG MISTAKE! lol .. there attuides didn't go along with them looks. But now i've found a guy with the looks and the body and the personality. -Summer- Obstables are those frightful things you see when you take your eyes off your goals. |
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Alexia
since 2001-06-07
Posts 164Sweet And Sassy |
I agree Summer .. I have to .. I had to admitt it but I have. I mean some guys Have the looks and A Great personality .. but others don't .. and I know alot of em! Alexia Bu the way .. Nice poem Keep it up! If I tell you I love you, Can I keep you? |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really think that everybody can be guilty of this to some extent. Well done on expressing your thoughts though. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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