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Teen Poetry #5

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sillywilly
Junior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 33
oklahoma

0 posted 2002-07-22 02:03 AM

I smile as I think
of you and you and you
one by one my mind brings you up
to bring me happiness again.
Who could have known that I'd so fortunate
to know so many like you
You make my heart happy
and You make me smile
and You make all of me
mind
body
soul
Happy

~just came to me so tell me what you think~

shadowchild458
Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 117
MN,USA

1 posted 2002-07-23 01:30 AM

i think it's pretty good. please, go to dark poetry and write what happens when they turn against you when it happens cause it'll make for a great poem! sorry, i shouldn't be here, i'm in a dark dark dark mood. so i'll leave now! good bye!

life may just take a while but i guess heaven's worth the wait

AKJ

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

2 posted 2002-07-23 11:49 AM

great, sweet and romantic poem.

Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.)

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