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Riley_Grant New Member
since 2002-07-16
Posts 4 |
Flames lick my ankles, engulfed in flames Wonder floods my mind Apology seemed to be so deep down But the flames swallowed me slowly My heart leaps so sorry I say But the flames keep pulling me down apart we fall Under and under I fall the flames dance all around me But you just watch your eyes so cold and heartless My heart is locked up in two parts of a whole And all you can do it laugh so easily The flame take control down I go Your heart comes out to me you can't take it anymore You pull me out and wrap around me like a blanket I know that you really care |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Riley~ Welcome to Passions~ I think we'll enjoy having you share your thoughts here~ Take a look around and read and reply to some of the poetry of others ... we'll get to know you really well~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! You'll be wanting to check out our Critical Analysis forum for the really intense feedback that is so helpful to all of us in our mutual growth as poets. You keep writing...we'll keep reading! Karilea |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Riley, enjoyed the read and welcome to passions. Emotions run deep in us all To feel loved and wanted is our primal need Some find it hard to express with words Till the true need of a touch or expression of love This comes at the moment of real need Sincerely Rick Read you again soon. |
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