Had to write and this came out....

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Teen Poetry #5

Had to write and this came out....

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-07-15 11:29 PM

Desperately searching,
For the words to write,
Could this one little stanza really get through to you?
By my calender there's too many days,
Until you come back for good,
Could a few days apart really destroy me like this?
Awake in the middle of the night,
Sleep translates to dreams of you,
Could a stupid fantasy really break me down inside?
When I show you this poem,
I'll have confessed myself to you,
Could three little words really change my life?
Yes,
They could.

It's not very good..but I really needed to write something..you know what I mean? I just had to write and this is what came out..

"Then again, you're always first when no one's on your side."-incubus

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

1 posted 2002-07-16 12:13 PM

Muse on vacation? Mine was in Disney world for about 4 weeks. Sent me postcards, but it just wasn't the same.

It was pretty good... the emotions sounded very sincere.

"if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2002-07-26 10:59 AM

Do we all go thru this.
I write about love all the time.
I think cupid finally tried to hit me with an arrow but he missed and hit my muse.
Now I believe my muse is dead

thanks for sharing

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

3 posted 2002-07-26 11:09 AM

hey,
damn if i had some sort of currency for every time i've had this feeling (foreign or american, no matter really) i would be a fantastically rich woman. i liked this though. i wish you luck in the situation.
-bergundy-

maybe i'll catch fire, something nice to warm me. something pure to burn away the darkness, that hides inside my mind. -alkaline trio-

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