a poem I wrote for my EX called ANGEL

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Teen Poetry #5

a poem I wrote for my EX called ANGEL

Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13
Minnesota

0 posted 2002-07-14 11:25 AM

ANGEL
By: Jonathan L.
I have been to the gates
I have seen the angels
Many took my mind
One took my heart
I am one of the lucky
She is my one and only
She stimulates mind
Body
Soul
I let her go with one word
Do I feel stupid
yes
Does she deserve better
yes
Can I let go
no
Reason
She is my angel

ericaisamonkey
Member

since 2002-04-04

Posts 51
A little town north of nowhere

1 posted 2002-07-14 05:30 PM

would you be angry if i copied this and gave it to my ex?!?! lol. its very nice.. i can totally relate. lovelotz

*Erica* :loveya:

Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13
Minnesota

2 posted 2002-07-14 05:46 PM

umm...actually I dont really care...if you lie and say you wrote it then I would care

jave
Junior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 18
CO, USA

3 posted 2002-07-15 04:35 PM

Why don't guys write about me this way?

I loved it. Lucky girl.

Jonathan The Mind
Junior Member

since 2002-07-13

Posts 13
Minnesota

4 posted 2002-07-15 05:50 PM

I am glad you all enjoy my work...

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

5 posted 2002-07-15 11:47 PM

This was great. I liked it alot..I'm a sucker for love poems. But seriously I loved it!!

*~erin~*

"Then again, you're always first when no one's on your side."-incubus

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